A favor to ask

[! JDM The Professional !]

EFK,

I would really love some feedback on my music. I am proud of every song I write, but I know there's always need for improvement. Vocally, I know I need to improve, but I listen to things I recorded last year, and things I recorded last week and the quality is increasing steadily. I record using my Iphone, so the quality of sound is always shit which sucks, but I make do. I love recording, I love playing, I love every aspect of music.

For those who remember- I was meant to be recording some stuff professionally this year, but it fell through for the guy was dodgy as the MeXuS (HWO 4 life)

The feedback I'm after is on the lyrics and musical content. I'm already aware my singing needs fine tuning. lol

http://www.youtube.com/user/foleyxl18?feature=mhee

That's the link to my channel. If you guys could give some stuff a listen and give me feedback, it would mean so very much. Positive and negative, it's all good. I strive to improve

Many warm regards,

Jordan.