Reviewers/Full critiques

[Zombie Gunn]

Time is winding down as I finish the first draft of the novel I've been meaning to write for two years.  I'm nearly 60,000 words right now and should finish at a little over 80,000 for this draft by early December.

I'm wondering if anybody is interested in giving it a full read over once it's ready and helping out with corrections, things that don't make sense and general weak points that I should work on.  Keep in mind, this will be a full length novel so would be more of a commitment than a roleplay or results feedback.  It's middle-ages fantasy taking place in its own unique universe.

The Trouen Empire has essentially conquered all of the known world.  When the Nighthand embarks on their trip home, they come across a completely slaughtered village.  While an agent of The Tide attempts to solve this mystery, the captain of the Nighthand aims to use this tragedy to his advantage if he can pin it on a rival governor.  Meanwhile, a strange plague is spreading in the east that threatens to spread to all corners of the world and an uprising of the recently conquered Brakhur has the empire spread far too thin.  Behind all of this is Sundir, the black city of ruins that was once the home of all people and where now something horrible and ancient stirs.

[Black Death]

I would love to take a look and give you a review no problem

[GM Franchise]

I would love to take a look and give you a review no problem

Same here.

[Zombie Gunn]

Awesome.  Still making progress on the 1st draft.  Finished Chapter 30 tonight and I've got between 4-6 chapters left, depending on where the story decides it wants to go.  (They have a mind of their own, you know) Will do a quick revision after that, and then it should be ready for reading/review.