The Hotel Presents: Lockdown II

[sc00t]

http://hotel.ewmania.com/release/latest.shtml

A triumphant return to business for The Hotel, and with it... an orgy of violence and the reopening of a story once started.

Prior reading recommended: Lockdown I: http://hotel.ewmania.com/release/251106.shtml

It's been a really long time since I wrote absolutely anything really so I'm looking for some feedback on the writing.

-sc00t
(Please move if it's in the wrong place. Wasn't sure where to put it...)